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Poem: “The Constellations Will Follow” (by Mary Margaret Park)

“The Constellations Will Follow” for Jessica
by Mary Margaret Park

upon the silver moon she rode
in a swirl of phantom dreams
the stars beckoned with her passage
reflecting greatness that they’d seen

she was alone and feeling weary
so didn’t notice them at all
blinded by past failures
she’d given up, would let them fall

ill fortune had been her siren song
and she’d sung it very well
but yesterday’s ruins were receding
her broken heart could finely heal

mother, son, and daughter
are the radiance of the sun
lover, friend, and father
won’t let us falter, come undone

our course is true and righteous
we do not heed deception’s drum
the constellations will follow now
for the journey’s just begun

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Poem: “One Mind Reels” (by Mary Margaret Park)

“One Mind Reels”
by Mary Margaret Park

a bitter wind blows
into a slow motion
slide show

an over exposed mind reel
blasting in from the past
a watered down version
of the man with the mask

a conquistador’s parade
in the faded fashions of yesterday

a procession for here and now
for a vibrant mind
ahead of his time
so fine beneath
a waste land of shadows

has the light grown dim
where his dreams dwell

perhaps a ship dwelling
a hull with no name
witless and wandering
in dark hours of pain

a maiden voyage through
the blackest inlet
where there’s no outlet
except for free will

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Poem: “Passage Left, Nowhere Right” (by Mary Margaret Park)

“Passage Left, Nowhere Right”
by Mary Margaret Park

desert ice
parched
dry
weeping
in that slice of time

pain
the rust of reason
paper thin
cuts
constant
a faraway echo
of grinding glass

dark alleys
cold and indifferent
passages leading nowhere

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Poem: “Moods” (by Mary Margaret Park)

“Moods”
by Mary Margaret Park

our moods are many things
a kite a sail a coin a cane
soaring high into to the air
or tumbling back into despair

our emotions frame the hours
casual keepers of glass towers
with no regard to flights of fancy
casting stones or sitting calmly

at will they shape the day
with brightest joy or blackest thunder
breaking thoughts as they plunder
these fickle stewards of repose

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Poem: “Line” (by Mary Margaret Park)

“Line”
by Mary Margaret Park

the wind
a blue streak intersecting
today and tomorrow

a hint
a suggestion
a notion

an exchange
between friends
a whispered echo
translucent
and bittersweet

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Poem: “The New Working Class Poor” (by Mary Margaret Park)

“The New Working Class Poor”
by Mary Margaret Park

sucking up futures
with slot machine wiles
pop go the weasels
with painted on smiles

our congress sold out
to big bidders in suits
we’re choking and gasping
our heads in their noose

keepers of fortunes
that we’ll never know
purveyors of privilege
and grifters of gold

Clinton, Bush, or Obama
who cares?
like Iraq’s WMD’s
they aren’t really there

insurance brokers are
in bed with the Fed
drug makers and bankers
line up to give head

the middle class dying
one tax at a time
as cash rich elitists fleece
their pockets of dimes

economies reeling
weakened and frail
we’re dialing for dollars
in hegemony hell

higher gas prices
the lesson of crude
as Opec’s fists tighten
on what’s left of the loot

the dollar is pitching
and yawing with debt
corrupt politicians
a new terrorist threat?

we’re middle class citizens
in an undeclared war
upscale Americans are
the new working poor

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Comment from Srjac
Time January 2, 2012 at 3:06 pm

How real you are in analysing the post war conditions, the crisis!1 Yes ultimately the common people atone for all crimes. Leaders may come and go, but the citizens are wounded

Comment from Russelle Macapil
Time January 2, 2012 at 3:08 pm

What a very nice poem, it speaks of the reality that we are facing right now.. a mind opening poem..

Comment from Kamal Khondoker
Time January 2, 2012 at 3:15 pm

loved how you described the state of the working class of America. Memorized it once and for all.

Comment from Kamal Khondoker
Time January 2, 2012 at 3:17 pm

loved how you described the state of the middle-class people in America. Memorized it once and for all

Comment from ronnyb
Time January 2, 2012 at 3:22 pm

This poem describes accurately what is happening in the world .The poet describes a deep understanding of world economics and politics .Very well crafted !

Comment from marak
Time January 2, 2012 at 4:46 pm

the poems is touching me. it inspires me to do more. good job

Comment from macanan
Time January 2, 2012 at 4:53 pm

i have no commnt but “it is great peom”. i like it so much

Comment from Bill
Time January 2, 2012 at 5:05 pm

Mind blowing poem. Much appreciated. I love how greatly you described.

Comment from Jane Sanchez
Time January 2, 2012 at 5:37 pm

Come on! Ask Filipinos. We have the same situation here. If I am going to give a title to this poem, mine will be “Not Only in America”

Comment from tatzkie
Time January 2, 2012 at 6:51 pm

This poem talks about the current economy of America. And this is the Reality .Some Politician are corrupt and think only themselves. Middle class is the one who are suffering for their ambitions. This is not only happening in America but all over the world. I hope that this poem could reach a lot of people and open up their minds.

Comment from Ihsan Fitriadi
Time January 2, 2012 at 7:20 pm

A depiction of the situation is very sharp, directly touching the heart of the matter. Criticism through poetry always raises two sides: The beauty and the sharpening of the sentence. You are able to describe precisely, about the current situation through the alloy is quite beautiful sentence …. A good poem!

Comment from Moniquea
Time January 2, 2012 at 7:27 pm

I really like this poem you are speaking on what so many of us are going through. The world and society we live in has so many issues so much time is spent on the unnecessary that in the end real problems go un-noticed and “we” the citizens are the ones who suffer.

Comment from richelle
Time January 2, 2012 at 7:41 pm

The poem really showed us the flaws of the government nowadays. It is true that all those things are happening. It is really created how you expressed it in a creative way. I will look forward for more poems from you.

Comment from Crystal
Time January 2, 2012 at 8:46 pm

This poem really brings what is happen in the world into light. I cant agree more that this is sadly society, the government, and the politics. They truely dont care up us and we are the suffering and the victims. We are the only ones who can stand up and voice.

Comment from ROLIVIC PEREZ
Time January 2, 2012 at 8:49 pm

Frankly, as a poem, I am expecting that the lines do rhyme at the end as a usual literary art of such type. Nonetheless, the subject is timely and relevant. Vanishing are the days when American working class enjoy the glory of working as depicted in the poem because of greed for power and wealth. I guess, this scenario is not only true to the Americans though. There have been people from other races having the same plight years ago.

Comment from archaiwy
Time January 2, 2012 at 9:04 pm

the poem is good to show the present situation of the middle class Americans.The American government should pay more attention to the living standard of the American people.

Comment from Jing
Time January 2, 2012 at 9:09 pm

This is a great poem. Nobody can really win from the war. Yes, the politicians should pay more attention to people’s lives.

Comment from Rajeev
Time January 2, 2012 at 9:42 pm

Many of us would like this poem as it presented the situation of the middle class.
Every where middle class family got pissed from officials as well as government. It is very hard to live as a middle class man.
Poem truly highlighted the basic thing that lack in middle lack and what they needing.

Comment from Batencila Annabelle
Time January 2, 2012 at 9:52 pm

You are such a a great poet. You are true regarding the situation of the middle class people now in America. Great work!

Comment from Tao YM
Time January 2, 2012 at 10:25 pm

You peom bring me to the real world, it let me know that peom is not something far away for us. You really expressed what I wamt to say!

Comment from Maria
Time January 2, 2012 at 10:54 pm

It says more about the situation of the, mostly,the third-world goverment…It is a free thought of a poet.

Comment from Manroks23
Time January 2, 2012 at 11:11 pm

This poem has all to say about the present day affair and about the people taking advantages of their positions,corruption is a plague to a nation and war a thread,all in all middle class people suffers the most,I really like the description of this poem…..

Comment from laarni ortega
Time January 2, 2012 at 11:20 pm

Hi! Tour poem has a deep meaning and empathizes with the oppresses people. You are really right that people who have power take advantage of those who are poor and that is a sad reality.

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Time January 12, 2012 at 9:18 am

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Time January 13, 2012 at 6:33 am

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Time January 16, 2012 at 6:57 pm

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Time January 16, 2012 at 7:03 pm

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End Of Year Updates Almost Done

It is still unbelievable that 2012 is right around the corner (damn!), but that’s okay. There are so many items on my list to give back to all of you that in reality, it is really all that should matter at this juncture. A lot of old paradigm minded suits will balk at the notion that anyone should empower music lovers or e-reading enthusiasts (as it were) but come on, we don’t live in 1981 (let alone 1950) so, why hold anyone hostage? You’ve got to get with the times (seriously). And I can’t say all I’d like to say so, just heed this next bit of advice.

Go read this article now!

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Comment from Kris
Time December 27, 2011 at 10:51 pm

Gr8 NEWS!!!!!

Comment from John
Time December 27, 2011 at 10:52 pm

Totally! Bring on Road Avenger……..

Comment from Jarik
Time December 27, 2011 at 10:52 pm

Love it!!! :)

Comment from Max
Time January 1, 2012 at 4:56 pm

Cool way around B&N.

Comment from Essie
Time January 12, 2012 at 11:39 am

Yeah, that’s the ticket!!!!!!!!

Comment from Rayshelon
Time January 13, 2012 at 1:19 am

Well I guess I don’t have to spend the weekend figuring this one out! Great jobs!!

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Poem: “Corporation Wars” (by Mary Margaret Park)

corporations
turn on a dime
slap backs and greenbacks
they’re robbing you blind

enron beginnings
etched in the sand
with tacit impunity
they shape the land

fat cat opportunists
seize the dollars decline
to downsize and justify
the end of overtime

they’ll exploit you
use you
run you into the ground
keep the money coming
or they’ll take you down

they’ll cry foul
if you’ve got dirt on your hands
but your sales are slipping so
they’ve taken a stand

CEO’s and CFO’s are
the prophets of greed
selling out the working
class in order to succeed

workers can’t survive
on the minimum wage
it’s a new world order
where we’re free to be slaves

the working man loses
in the corporation wars
its their boardroom motto
and we are their whores

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Comment from David Giardi
Time October 2, 2011 at 7:31 pm

HOT!!! Keep it up!!!

Comment from Jen
Time October 2, 2011 at 9:54 pm

You should come to Occupy Wall St. !!!!!

Comment from Thomas Cruz
Time October 7, 2011 at 2:35 pm

Funny but all of these ideas are expressed in the form of a poem. The composer of this poem definitely has the greatest ideas of the corporate world as well as the line of employment. Surely a great amount of work, effort and research has been showered for this poem to have such strong ideas portrayed by simple words.

Comment from Srjac
Time October 7, 2011 at 2:53 pm

When all try for the SEO standard highest reputation the dollar value has been declining and the poor workers’ job has become very chief to the extent of not permitting him survive without debt. With corporate networking man has shifted down making more place to harware and software. Its a pity that man allows man to sink down

Comment from Justine Coldwell
Time October 7, 2011 at 4:50 pm

I like how to author put his thoughts in poems. This expresses the real thing that is happening atm. I think we need more and more writers who can cleverly write about social issues. It will serve as an awakening to other people that will spark people to achieve a better living rather than just accepting what is going on in their surroundings. This is thumbs up!

Comment from Callito
Time October 7, 2011 at 7:10 pm

Thats awesome ! Keep it up!

Comment from air
Time October 7, 2011 at 7:17 pm

I like this poem about corporation wars. It was an excellent idea to protest.

Comment from john huynh
Time October 7, 2011 at 9:20 pm

I do not understand too much the poem in English because of the differrent language. But I think this poem is not bad. Thansk your share.

Comment from Geo Raju
Time October 8, 2011 at 9:26 am

i just read your other poem “he loves women”.i think this one is better than that.i think one can rap on this.you may send it to eminem.

Comment from air
Time October 8, 2011 at 9:34 am

fat cat opportunists
seize the dollars decline.
I like this line a lot!

Comment from Ryan
Time October 8, 2011 at 9:37 am

This is a good poem dedicated to corporate world which have everything, wealthy corporate world also needs to work for poor and needy.

Comment from Vidhyaprakash
Time October 8, 2011 at 10:34 am

Great poem with a good theme. The poem is with nice rhythm and with a great meaning

Comment from Oindrila Ghoshal
Time October 8, 2011 at 10:52 am

This poem vividly captures the exploitative spirit of corporate brands around the world.They exploit us to no end and we are blind consumers who do not realize what they are doing to us.We just keep getting exploited.I enjoyed reading the poem.Thanks for the share.

Comment from Yolanda
Time October 8, 2011 at 11:38 am

Nice way of protesting , very nice rymes, now put some music and sing it at loud, I hope Fat Cat can hear it and get hurt their hearts to stop the hard .

Comment from kirazuel
Time October 8, 2011 at 12:11 pm

I really enjoied it! It’s a really very witty (I hope I’m using the right adjective, I’m not a native English speaker). “where we’re free to be slaves” Sadly true. Congrats.

Comment from Sarah
Time October 8, 2011 at 2:55 pm

This really personifies what is going on in New York right now. I did not see a date on this but I would love to know when it was written. So true and so sad.

Comment from Sherry Rowell
Time October 8, 2011 at 7:05 pm

Great social activist voice going on here.
More people need to get this kind of in-your-face commentary out in the public so our leaders can understand something real.

Comment from wjack2010
Time October 8, 2011 at 7:08 pm

What a lovely poem. This would be one awesome way to try and persuade someone to go and do something, keep up the great poems.

Comment from Jack Wilkinson
Time October 8, 2011 at 7:09 pm

Your poems are great to read, I will certainly be reading more of your work as this is truely amazing. Thanks for the share.

Comment from Batencila Annabelle
Time October 8, 2011 at 9:08 pm

Great poem!What you said is really happening in this world, hope that they’ll appreciate the efforts of the workers and give them what they truly deserve.

Comment from Kerry
Time October 8, 2011 at 9:10 pm

I can understand almost ever word in this poem, but I can’t understand the real meanings. Maybe it is beacuse I just paid attention to the language instead of culture before.

Comment from sanofer
Time October 8, 2011 at 10:20 pm

very good poem.the composer knew very well abov the corporate world and written the sufferings of workers in an artistic war.nice way to protest.

Comment from Jasper
Time December 15, 2011 at 3:13 pm

AWESOME!! Keep em coming!!!! (added by Mobile using Mippin)

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Poem: “He Loves Women” (by Mary Margaret Park)

He loves women
Beautiful women

It’s in the smell of her hair
and the feel of her skin
The sway of her hips
and the tilt of her chin

It’s in the stride of her step
and the shape of her calve
The spark of her eyes
and the sound of her laugh

He loves women
Beautiful women

It’s in the red of her lips
and the rose of her cheeks
The embrace of her arms
and the silk of her speech

It’s in the rise of her breasts
and the tones of her sigh
In the curve of her rear
and the cream of her thighs

He loves women
Beautiful, sensual Women

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Comment from Jay
Time October 2, 2011 at 7:36 pm

I loves me some women too he heh!!!!

Comment from Kerry
Time October 7, 2011 at 10:02 pm

I don’t think this is the real love. Love means not only appearance but also mutual understanding and responsibility.

Comment from Mark Lloyd
Time October 7, 2011 at 10:21 pm

Very nice poem, really amazing.

Comment from Jing
Time October 7, 2011 at 11:31 pm

This poem uses simple words and it is easy to understand. I like the description “silk of her speech” and you can imagine that he loves women who are graceful and elegant. This is why he will fall in love.

Comment from Khoa
Time October 7, 2011 at 11:47 pm

This poem is very short and concise. It describes the specific body to the woman’s face. The poem also shows the passionate love of the author throws with this woman.

Comment from Thomas Cruz
Time October 8, 2011 at 12:49 am

This poem can actually make a woman’s heart melt. The attraction is so strong it can almost be felt. I feel the words are strong enough for the outside of a woman. I am sure there will also be some praises for the inside as well.

Comment from Geo Raju
Time October 8, 2011 at 9:22 am

sorry to say i didn’t like the poem.This doesn’t make any sense to me.Anyway don’t stop writing.Expect a better one next time.

Comment from taren
Time October 8, 2011 at 1:31 pm

As a male, I think the poem is concentrating most on all different types of women not one specific person. Its a nice poem, keep up the good work. :)

Comment from Srjac
Time October 8, 2011 at 2:49 pm

The woman enjoys all the attributes mentioned in the poem. This reality is like a magnet that attracts anyone. By nature man loves beauty and likes to possess. But if loving the woman for her beauty, without entering her heart, if you should just use and then throw… then is that appriciation and love for women genuine ?

Comment from Sarah
Time October 8, 2011 at 2:52 pm

Lovely poem, but it seems that rather than discussing love this poem is talking abour lust. Such an easy mistake for a human being to make…still beautiful in my opinion though.

Comment from Oindrila Ghoshal
Time October 8, 2011 at 3:20 pm

A very sensual poem indeed.It is lucid and raunchy.Enjoyed reading it!Though the poem is naughty in tone it is beautiful!

Comment from billant8
Time October 8, 2011 at 6:00 pm

This poem os very sensational. Covering almost all the parts of womans body with lyric words…looks like a thought that u had done in the past

Comment from Sherry Rowell
Time October 8, 2011 at 6:59 pm

I think that you convey a clear and memorable message in this poem. You have a great flow and rhythm with your word choices, rhymes, and line repititions. Sensually expressive writing!

Comment from Jack Wilkinson
Time October 8, 2011 at 7:11 pm

Lovely sweet poem. If I read the last word of each line it almost sounds like a RAP, if you put your mind to it, well done and good work.

Comment from jianlong
Time October 8, 2011 at 7:56 pm

good poem ,so lovely so sorrow.and so unforgettable . said a men”S love to a woman

Comment from Kerry
Time October 8, 2011 at 9:06 pm

I don’t think this is the real love. Love means not only appearance but also mutual understanding and responsibility.

Comment from Batencila Annabelle
Time October 8, 2011 at 9:11 pm

This poem refers to the appreciation of beautiful women out there but beauty is not only from the outside but also from the inside. Great poem though.

Comment from sanofer
Time October 8, 2011 at 10:28 pm

lovely poem. The poet has described nicely abov the love towards his girl.very simple lines and easy to understand.

Comment from mandee
Time October 9, 2011 at 1:15 am

It’s a sweet poem, so impressive and touching. Love it very much.

Comment from Ihsan Fitriadi
Time October 9, 2011 at 1:16 am

I think this is a love poem that describes a sense of awe and love the person who becomes her idol. Simply beautiful and touching!

Comment from Carissa
Time October 10, 2011 at 10:04 am

I am in no way a critic to any degree. I find no fault with this. It is obvious what the subject is, and while it gives an accurate description, it does not get vulgar.

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Poem: “Reflections” (by Mary Margaret Park)

reflections of humanity
like falling rain
insignificant

minutes
pour through our fingertips
like rain
reflections of you and I
and the people we love
droplets in time

hours
eclipse into nothingness
like heat lightening
on a summer evening

their impressions
flashing into oblivion
at the speed of light
posing questions…
the answering echoes of thunder
trailing replies

I wonder at their exchange
powerful and unconstrained
the unforgiving horizon reigns distant
beyond lies infinity
where knowledge ends

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Comment from Jen
Time October 2, 2011 at 7:33 pm

Wow, I’m actually of the mirror as a person identifier. Great job Mary!

Comment from Khoa
Time October 9, 2011 at 6:57 am

This life is not something you can learn. This letter is written in free style right? Makes me feel a bit confusing to read.

Comment from Jack Wilkinson
Time October 9, 2011 at 6:59 am

All poems tell a story, and this one certainly does, your poems are great. Can’t wait for the next lot of poems :)

Comment from marto_el
Time October 9, 2011 at 7:16 am

Very nice written! Firstly i was a bit confused about what are you trying to say, but than all became clear. Waiting you to post another poem :)

Comment from Vidhyaprakash
Time October 9, 2011 at 7:48 am

very wonderful poem with a great meaning, the words and terms used here are simple and easy to understand. I like your poem

Comment from Shane
Time October 9, 2011 at 7:48 am

the writer is great in automatically discern emotion. You must take a dig in her meaning and see for yourself if you’ll be able to find the true meaning. I reckon and I guess I got it indifferently.

Comment from gracie
Time October 9, 2011 at 6:33 pm

well written! good job Mary, hope I can see more poems from you.

Comment from Thomas Cruz
Time October 9, 2011 at 6:53 pm

This poem is composed with simple words. However, the choice of words combine into a meaningful poem. The idea of this actually penetrates into the inner spirit of the reader. It can actually make one stare out of the window and emotionally wander. This is definitely a great work.

Comment from Crystal
Time October 9, 2011 at 7:00 pm

I must say such a well written and meaningful poem here. While reading it I felt your inner self showing and representing. Each poem has a different meaning and story behind it.

Comment from melisa
Time October 9, 2011 at 7:18 pm

wow! I can actually see reflections in the rain as you write this! I really like it, you did a great job!

Comment from Kerry
Time October 9, 2011 at 7:27 pm

I like this short poem. It is nice, warm and somehow inspirational.

Comment from Nora Lee
Time October 9, 2011 at 7:33 pm

The message of the poem as I read it is about the brevity of time. This tells of the reality that indeed time passes so past and it really reminds me to value time even more.

Comment from Jing
Time October 9, 2011 at 8:57 pm

This is a nice poem. And it makes me have some deep thoughts about so many things, such as the humanity, relationship and so on.

Comment from Carissa
Time October 9, 2011 at 9:32 pm

I work with children, so most of my exposure to poetry rhymes. It is always amazing to read a poem with so little structure. I find it a true testament to the writers ability to choose the right words to give the biggest effect.

Comment from john huynh
Time October 9, 2011 at 9:44 pm

I do not like poem very much. But I think this poem also is meaningful for humanity.

Comment from Batencila Annabelle
Time October 9, 2011 at 9:58 pm

Great poem!You are indeed a poet. Wish I can also share some of my poems with you. Very meaningful one.

Comment from Yashwanth
Time October 9, 2011 at 10:09 pm

Your poem reminds me of how time is related to the pointlessness of Life. However much we leave our impressions on the world, time swallows it all.

Comment from Edna Reyes
Time October 9, 2011 at 10:32 pm

This is a very poignant poem about life and realities. Somehow reflections of our life brings an opening to what the future holds for us. Your poem reminds me I am not that young anymore and someday i will be doing many reflective actions in my future.

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